Standing as if there is no one around,
Closed eyes,trembling body,numb ears and two feet above ground
Passing thoughts made me feel like cryin,
Is this love or its another phase of my drying life.
Sometimes I really wonder is this me only or my replica of imaginary strive
Her beautiful smile makes me suffer from hallucination,
I feel as if I am on an illusionary vacation
Is this love or just another infatuation.
I still remember the moments we spent together,
But gone are those days when we used to have a love weather.
Still those moments give me everlasting goosebumps
Because its something I have not experienced with any other.
Is this love or mere accumulation of shining treasure
The night has gone darker and day brighter
But her fading memories are getting lighter.
Would she ever come back and rejuvenate my life all together,
Is this love or motivation to steer further.
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simply superb..
i loved it..liked from the bottom of my heart:)
i m xpecting many more like this :)
@misha-hehe thanx...well i ll try mah level best
.very beautifully written.!superb!
ossum.....tu poet b bn gya[:D]
newayz realy a gud wrk...
@achint-thanx buddy
@deepika-ha ah bas aise hi yaar...neways thanx
its never "FALLEN IN LOVE"......ITS ALWAYS "RISEN IN LOVE".....:)SO it always motivates:)
[nd memories r the only thing dat never change when everyone else does:)]
nice peice of poetry(its always good when it comes directly from the heart and is honest)KEEP IT UP! CHEERS!:)
haha thanx but dat was not ne kinda personal experience....so i just wrote keepin in view the writer's perspective....but ya u r ryt.. and thanx for d appreciation...
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well written...seems like it came from the heart *winks*...shubham dah poet - a side i've neva seen...:D
he thanx shireen...:-)
shubham--a poet??? ;)
well m perplexed..quite sincere effort...unlike u of course..!ha.. :)
ha ha of course buddy its unlike m at ne point of tym...u know m better dan anyone else i suppose...haha but still one shud try sumthin different...isnt it?
bro........ really great...
liked the feelings with which u have written.....
u r very good writer... keep writing always.....
thanx buddy.....thanx a ton
gud wrkk......
hey thanx arleen
hey yar.. dats gr8 wrk done..
itz awesum man!!! .. liked it..
thanx yaar..:-)
oye..tu llikhta bhi hai..poetry haan...cool... gud 1....
thanx aashima..
i like :)
glad...:-)
Wow, i so can relate to it.
Good Luck! <3
Ashmit you rock!!!
Ashmit u rock !!
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